|[Lunar: Eternal Blue] If We Meet in Dreams (1/?)
||[Apr. 13th, 2005|12:22 am]
omgwtf fanfiction :O
If We Meet in Dreams (1/?)|
Lunar: Eternal Blue, Hiro/Lucia, 2785 words.
because I said so :D for thematic elements
Summary: After the end of the game, Lucia is having nightmares. Hiro figures a change of pace will cheer her up, and the two return to Lunar. But a simple vacation isn't going to be as simple as it seems...
Notes: December of 2003, and that's just the last time I edited--and then not a lot. I think this was actually written in more like May of 2002. (Yikes!) I am going to finish this some day even if it kills me; I think I've been holding back largely because I know that the ending is going to be depressing, and I don't want to write depressing for Hiro and Lucia, because I love them both to pieces. Sigh.
It feels mighty surreal to come back and read something written so long ago. I'm having mixed feelings over whether I'm satisfied or not. (Well, I'm never truly satisfied, but for two years ago, it's at least not as bad as I'd have expected it to be...) The extent to which is doesn't rely on dialogue is impressive, for me, since I have a horrible tendency to skimp on descriptions and use too many talking heads. I've been working on correcting that, but it's much less of a problem here than I'd have thought it would be.
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